Comments on: The King’s Grave

By: Oonah V Joslin

Oonah V Joslin — Mon, 02 Nov 2009 23:53:05 +0000

Sensuous and scary Brian. Well done.

john ritchie — Tue, 03 Nov 2009 11:59:41 +0000

Very good, Brian, powerful and effective imagery.

Reminded me of the Indian practice of Suttee, where the wife immolates herself on her husband’s funeral pyre.

Brian Laing — Wed, 04 Nov 2009 18:06:24 +0000

Thanks Oonah and John. Just got my password so that I can respond.

Chris Yodice — Wed, 11 Nov 2009 04:07:52 +0000

Very nice, Brian. I could feel her resignation in her “one last breath” and “one last look.” Duty-bound, indeed.

Brian Laing — Wed, 25 Nov 2009 17:06:46 +0000

Hi Chris,

Glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting.

Brian.