Comments on: Through the Cracks

By: monteverdi

monteverdi — Sun, 14 Feb 2010 07:28:22 +0000

Amazing power for such a short. Well done.

Paul Phillips — Sun, 07 Feb 2010 20:22:50 +0000

Agree with Jen on this. Brilliantly told story with a finale that is as haunting as it is horrific. A fantastic piece.

jennifer walmsley — Thu, 04 Feb 2010 15:17:59 +0000

Many thanks for your kind comments, Oonah and Jen. Glad you both liked it.

Jenzarina — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 17:33:03 +0000

Great first line, wonderful language and an ending that ends this story perfectly. Convincingly horrific.

Oonah V Joslin — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 10:47:53 +0000

One of your very best Jennifer