MicroHorror

July 27, 2009

Love Shot

“You’re sure?” he asked Julia, gun in hand. “I want you to be certain.”

“There seems no other way, Jack. Yes, it’s the right thing for both of us.”

“They’ll never let us live together. Never.”

“I know. Do it, Jack. Do it now.”

He kissed her tears, pressed the revolver to her head, and pulled the trigger. The woman crumpled to the floor with one shot. Blood bubbled from her temple, soaking the entire side of her face.

“My turn,” he whispered. Jack took the gun’s barrel full into his mouth.

Julia’s head still leaked blood onto the hardwood floor.

Jack hesitated, lowering the revolver.

“Well, maybe after lunch.”

3 Comments »

  1. Nice story! I enjoyed this!

    Comment by Bob Eccles — July 27, 2009 @ 2:12 pm

  2. Great bit of flash, valuable lesson about going first.

    Comment by Leehughes — July 27, 2009 @ 11:13 pm

  3. Got a good chuckle out of that one.

    Comment by Viktor James Night — December 31, 2010 @ 6:19 pm

RSS feed for comments on this post. TrackBack URL

Leave a comment

Powered by WordPress