Comments on: To Hold Her One Last Time

By: Sean Monaghan

Sean Monaghan — Fri, 23 Sep 2011 03:19:27 +0000

Whoops, sorry Harley, only just saw your comment. Ooops, sorry to offend. I have a (male) colleague at work who loves zombies. His name is Harley, and I wrote the story with his permission :-)

By: Harley

Harley — Fri, 02 Jul 2010 02:44:30 +0000

this offended me in two ways. One Harley is now a nation wide GIRL NAME in as which im a girl named HARLEY. also im a kid and i was very offended at the coldness of the organ eating no brained freak eating that poor kids body!! you cold hearted beast!
sadly to say for me it was otherwise good, jut amke sure you dont offend anyone…AGAIN

By: Sean Monaghan

Sean Monaghan — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 21:52:22 +0000

I mean thanks Bob.

By: Sean Monaghan

Sean Monaghan — Thu, 18 Jun 2009 21:51:23 +0000

Thanks Boy, thanks nobodyhome – I appreciate your comments.

By: nobodyhome

nobodyhome — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 20:22:28 +0000

Definitely a nice spin on the average zombie story. Plus a rarely seen “good” outcome for the main character.

By: Bob Eccles

Bob Eccles — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 19:28:52 +0000

Nicely written! I thought you did a wonderful job of portraying the confusion in his mind (brains) as the change overtook him. A most enjoyable tale!

By: Sean Monaghan

Sean Monaghan — Mon, 15 Jun 2009 00:49:46 +0000

Thanks Alan.

By: Alan W. Davidson

Alan W. Davidson — Sun, 14 Jun 2009 23:11:34 +0000

That was a nice change to the zombie genre. His fight against what was inevitable was described well.