Adult Entertainment
Taylor watched the latest line of hot girls queuing up for some loving.
Sheer class.
Who cared that all of his features were shot at night?
Convention time.
He felt unwell.
Wondered why the other porn guys wouldn’t hang out with him.
And when he got back to his room, someone had left him a wreath.
Weeks later.
He felt like shit.
But he couldn’t miss out on work.
He was too hooked on the girls.
He saw the van that brought them in.
Marked Succubus Productions.
Taylor wondered what that meant.
But only briefly.
Nice! You fit a lot into a very short story – I enjoyed it!
Comment by Bob Eccles — February 21, 2012 @ 4:53 pm
Good job. Not a creepy WOW-zer!, but I don’t think it’s supposed to be. Instead, its strength lies in its black humor–and man, is it strong. Author can be proud of this one.
Comment by Rob M. Miller — February 21, 2012 @ 9:39 pm
Thanks, guys! I AM rather proud of this one – glad you both enjoyed it!
Comment by Shaun Avery — February 22, 2012 @ 7:15 am
Concise horror piece. Well done.
Comment by Sandra Crook — February 22, 2012 @ 2:42 pm
I like horror that makes me smile :)
Comment by Oonah V Joslin — February 24, 2012 @ 1:54 pm