Comments for MicroHorror

Comment on Should Have Worn Wellies by Oonah V Joslin

Oonah V Joslin — Thu, 09 Sep 2010 20:28:52 +0000

Thank you Charlie and Ian :)

Sandra — Thu, 09 Sep 2010 15:44:12 +0000

Thanks for the comments everybody.

Brooke Broadbent — Thu, 09 Sep 2010 13:15:47 +0000

Lynne,

An insightful inner monologue of a tortured mind. And a microcosm of life.

Brooke Broadbent

Oonah V Joslin — Thu, 09 Sep 2010 10:07:44 +0000

Nice writing Sandra

jennifer walmsley — Thu, 09 Sep 2010 06:54:29 +0000

Excellent. A gentle horror. Wonderful descriptions of both cat and the poor, suffering woman.

Bill West — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 22:21:45 +0000

Well written and full of appeal. You know your cats!

Well done!

Bill

TJ Antley — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 20:09:47 +0000

I really liked this story. It is very serene.

TJ Antley — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 16:00:43 +0000

I really like your story voice. This is a really great idea and the way that you convey it is perfect.

Harley M. — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 00:54:53 +0000

you went from him narrating to an unknown speaker narrating.that was just poor

Harley M. — Wed, 08 Sep 2010 00:53:12 +0000

that was disgusting and horrible to even think about, not scary at all.That was the worst i have read so far.